Notice how the introduction to this resume is very concise. People often think they have to write long introductions to make themselves look more impressive but this isn’t true.

Recruiters are always going to quickly skim an introduction, so keep it as brief as you can and still make your point.
In this case, we wanted to keep the intro short because we wanted that great quote to stand out. A quote like that is gold, so if you have one, make sure it’s very prominent.